CivilWarLand in Bad Decline by George Saunders (20 Books of Summer #17)

51QARZbRoHL._SX334_BO1,204,203,200_My final book completed for 20 Books of Summer was a good one. I’ve been a fan of George Saunders for years, since I read his 2013 short story collection Tenth of December.  His first novel, Lincoln in the Bardo, completely blew me away. His first short story collection, CivilWarLand in Bad Decline, had lingered on my Goodreads TBR list since 2014. I’m glad I finally read it – it’s so interesting to see how a favorite writer hones his skills over time.

This 1996 collection is made up of six short stories and one novella. They are a motley, twisted assortment of near-future/slightly dystopian settings in which affable but morally skewed men and women toil away at low-wage menial jobs and screw up over and over again. America is basically a disintegrating theme park, beset by racial strife, class warfare, and environmental degradation, but somehow Saunders injects just enough notes of dark humor and decency to keep the reader from flinging the book away in despair.

My favorite story and one I think ranks with the best stories I’ve read is “Offloading For Mrs. Schwartz.” A man grieving the death of his wife Elizabeth, beset by guilt over the fight they had right before she was killed, tries to atone for his sins, both actual and perceived. He owns a franchise of something called “personal interactive holography” – basically a space in which people can pay to experience an intense virtual reality of their choosing. He’s got just a few regular customers who either can’t afford to pay him or pick rather disturbing virtual realities. But his “regular job, penance, albatross” is visiting an old, bed-ridden widow on the bad side of town with one of his headset modules and letting her temporarily experience happiness, both remembered and made-up.

In the early days of my grief Father Luther told me to lose myself in service by contacting Elder Aid, Inc. I got Mrs. Ken Schwartz. Mrs. Ken Schwartz lives in Rockettown remembering Mr. Ken Schwartz and cursing him for staying so late at Menlo’s Ten Pin on nights when she forgets he’s been dead eighteen years. Mrs. Ken Schwartz likes me and my happy modules. Especially she likes Viennese Waltz. Boy does she. She’s bedridden and lonely and sometimes in her excitement bruises her arms on her headboard when the orchestra starts to play. 

One night when he stops back by the store to pick up a module for a school group visit the next day (“Hop Hop the Bunny Masters Fractions”) he walks in on a robbery. After he subdues his attacker he scans his brain with his console and finds out that he’s named Hank, a WWII veteran who saw horrible things at Iwo Jima and never was quite right after. But something goes wrong with the scan, and our narrator realizes that he’s lifting memories from Hank, taking them out of his brain and depositing them in the module. Hank leaves the store carefree now that the horrors of war (and the first twenty years of his life) are gone from his memory. Our narrator has a brainstorm – why not edit Hank’s memories to give the schoolkids an immersive history lesson on what it was like to live in the 1930’s and ’40’s?

I won’t spoil the rest of the story, but I’ll just say that this one moved me like no other in the collection. Here I recognized the Saunders I’d already read, who is one of the most compassionate and humane writers living today. He has a knack for making the reader care about some questionable, flawed characters and celebrating what is most central to the human experience – loving and being loved.

If you’ve never read Saunders before I wouldn’t start with this. While each story certainly has his trademark black humor and originality, they weren’t as moving or polished as the stories in Tenth of December. And he has mellowed with age, treating his characters just a bit more gently in the later collection. Some of the violence and language in a few of these stories were a bit hard to stomach. I feel like his later writing is more hopeful somehow, while these stories feel harder and more cynical. Still, it was a very good collection and worth borrowing from the library for “Offloading For Mrs. Schwartz” alone. However, I would recommend reading one story at a time and then setting the book down for a day in between so they don’t run together.

So that’s it for another 20 Books of Summer challenge. I’m proud of myself for managing to read and write about 17 books from my list. It’s a new personal record. I may not participate again next year, though – sticking to a set list, even one that I create, starts to rub the wrong way about half-way through. All the others books out there start looking ever so much more appealing. (Mood reader!) But I have loved being in such good company with my fellow 20 Books people, and am grateful to Cathy at 746 Books for organizing the event again.

25 thoughts on “CivilWarLand in Bad Decline by George Saunders (20 Books of Summer #17)

  1. Hard and cynical is just what I’m in the mood for right now, what with the Kavanaugh hearings and my (gerrymandered red voting district) house “representative” sponsoring yet another “citizenship proof for voter rights” bill.

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  2. Good to know this isn’t his best story collection; I’ll definitely start with Tenth of December — my library has a copy of that one anyway. You did well on #20BooksofSummer! (I only read 7 of my original choices. The rest were substitutes…)

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  3. Congratulations on completing the challenge! 17 books is really impressive, you should be proud of yourself.

    I saw George Saunders read here in Calgary last year, and I really enjoyed listening to him speak. His interview was fascinating-he does truly seem like a really empathetic and intelligent man, although I’ve never read anything of his. Tenth of December does sound promising…

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  4. Well done – seventeen is great! Yeah, I find sticking to a list for the whole summer is too much too – I didn’t participate this year and, while I enjoyed watching everyone’s progress, I was quite happy not to feel under pressure – even though I know it’s only me who puts the pressure on myself!

    I didn’t much fancy Lincoln in the Bardo, but am intrigued by him as a writer. I shall follow your advice and stick Tenth of December on my wishlist – it’s been a while since I read a short story collection other than horror and crime.

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    1. I’m glad I’m not the only one who “puts pressure” on herself with reading lists. I do think I am done with 20 Books of Summer – for now! But I will certainly enjoy reading everyone’s reviews next year.

      Oh, I’m glad you’re willing to try Tenth of December. It’s a wonderful collection.

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  5. I stopped doing the 20 Books of Summer because I felt pushed to read and review faster, and I didn’t like that. I think there are options to do fewer books, but it IS the 20 Books of Summer challenge. Because everyone is so busy reading to keep up, I didn’t make new blog friends out of it, either. I definitely appreciate what Cathy started, though. So many people avoid the summer slog thanks to her!

    The only George Saunders piece I’ve read is a short story in the anthology What Are You Looking At?: The First Fat Fiction Anthology. It wasn’t a very kind story.


    1. I understand about the pressure to read and review quickly. I got way behind on reviewing and felt the pressure myself. That’s partly why I don’t think I’ll participate again.

      That’s a bummer about the story. I wonder which one it is. I feel like his stories have gotten a bit more tame and compassionate over the years but the early ones were quite grisly/depressing.


  6. This isn’t a challenge that falls in the right time of year for me; I am super focussed for the rest of the reading year and let the heat/humidity decide how focussed I will be in the summertime, but I can see where it would be fun and I do enjoy the reviews that you and other participants have posted along the way. Seems like Saunders still had some writing to do about grief after LitB by the sounds of it; I can see where that theme would get under your skin in a major way. Too bad you didn’t enjoy it as much as some of his other work, but it sounds worthwhile all the same.

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  7. What a great review! I not only loved your take on the book, but really appreciate your advice as to who should read this and how. I struggle with short stories so picking up and setting down is a good option for me. Like you, I’ve read Tenth and Lincoln so will add this to be my TBR as a something for when I’m in a Saunders mood!

    I also love seeing how anuthors change. I read some earlier John Boyne and could see how far he’d come in Heart’s Invisible Furies.

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  8. Congrats on making it to 17 books! A personal record is nothing to scoff at. I couldn’t be happier for you. 🙂 This isn’t an easy task to take on! I can relate to the mood-reader-ness of your 20 Books of Summer TBR. It can be taxing to be stuck into a vigorous reading schedule like that. Plus reviews?! It’s so much work.

    I really appreciate that you called out this is a great place to start. I hadn’t heard of Saunders before the publication of Lincoln in the Bardo, but the subject matter of the book (as well as the length!) puts me off. I have to be in the right mood for literary fiction, which is what this sounds like. That said– I can *always* get behind a short story collection. You totally hooked me with the VR story synopsis… I must know what happens! I am a bit nervous about some of the violence… are there stories you’d recommend I approach with caution? I don’t like graphic texts.

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